Kamis, 23 Februari 2012
Rabu, 22 Februari 2012
Minggu, 12 Februari 2012
Sabtu, 11 Februari 2012
Up dated fanfic
I've post my Parody Fanfic "If Zhang Xiao and Qing Quan come to Xiao Yan Zi's Body" in winglin here the url:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/itrinna/
it star Yang Mi and William Feng Shao Feng, Liu Shi and Nicky Wu in one Package
it star Yang Mi and William Feng Shao Feng, Liu Shi and Nicky Wu in one Package
Kamis, 09 Februari 2012
Three in one parody, Bu Bu Jing Xin, Gong and Huan Zhu Ge Ge Fanfic
3 days ago a crazy idea flopped down in to my mind, I was smiled along day think that, so after work i wrote that immediately. Jreng, jreng, in one night i can type 2000 word in English, so amazing! even in Indonesian, i can't type that much, I used to be slower thinker, because I pay attention to much on detail. If I write something i want my work historically accurate.
The story basically tell about Zhang Xiao and Qing Chuan experience in Huan Zhu Ge Ge era, both of them come in to Xiao Yan Zi body, so Xiao Yan Zi will have split personality, a lazy and cunning Qing Chuan and a gentle but greedy Zhang Xiao, they come on and off in Xiao Yan Zi mind. They don't love Wu Age like the real Xiao Yan Zi, and they pursue their own the man in their dream.
You can peek a chunk of my story here, actually I've upload it in fanfiction.net but they haven't publish my story until now. and my patience has evaporate. can you give me suggestion where i can post this fiction?
Qingchuan tossed her body on the bed, left, right, left, right, she felt bored has been along day staying in bed. She pressed number in her cell phone but no one picked her call. If only her mom did not forbid her to touch computer, now she would have played GTA, she loved violent so much, she’s so addicted to full blood chopped bodies, and felt satisfied if someone died before her, unfortunately she couldn’t kill someone in real life, how much she wanted to kill someone without getting arrested, and her number one target was her handsome fiancĂ©. “He is not bald, I want bald guy as my fiancĂ©, I always drooling whenever I see shiny bald forehead, that because I never see my own bald butt,” she took a long sighed,” May be I’m not belong this era!”
The story basically tell about Zhang Xiao and Qing Chuan experience in Huan Zhu Ge Ge era, both of them come in to Xiao Yan Zi body, so Xiao Yan Zi will have split personality, a lazy and cunning Qing Chuan and a gentle but greedy Zhang Xiao, they come on and off in Xiao Yan Zi mind. They don't love Wu Age like the real Xiao Yan Zi, and they pursue their own the man in their dream.
You can peek a chunk of my story here, actually I've upload it in fanfiction.net but they haven't publish my story until now. and my patience has evaporate. can you give me suggestion where i can post this fiction?
Qingchuan tossed her body on the bed, left, right, left, right, she felt bored has been along day staying in bed. She pressed number in her cell phone but no one picked her call. If only her mom did not forbid her to touch computer, now she would have played GTA, she loved violent so much, she’s so addicted to full blood chopped bodies, and felt satisfied if someone died before her, unfortunately she couldn’t kill someone in real life, how much she wanted to kill someone without getting arrested, and her number one target was her handsome fiancĂ©. “He is not bald, I want bald guy as my fiancĂ©, I always drooling whenever I see shiny bald forehead, that because I never see my own bald butt,” she took a long sighed,” May be I’m not belong this era!”
Then she turned on tv, she flipped the channel to Hunan TV, it reran Huan Zhu Ge Ge again, “TV definitely need other Qing dynasty series, I want more bald princes! One Wu Age isn’t enough for me, and his character’s not challenging at all, so composed, I suck on wild guy!” and then she got bored again watching old Huan Zhu Ge Ge. Her eyes widened when infotainment reported behind the scene remake Huan Zhu Ge Ge, the reporter was interviewing the little cheerful girl with mole in her chin, “From your face, I guess you play as Concubine Ling, do you?” asked the dumb new reporter.
“Don’t you see my cute tassels in my hair do? Does Concubine Ling wear them?” Her cheerfulness turned to angst.
“Ehm, sorry, I don’t see you wearing pants, so you just cameo, where is the next little swallow?” The reporter blushed, how embarrassing not recognize a maid and thought her as a concubine.
“SHE IS RIGHT BEFORE YOU!” Li Sheng roared with flame as her background. The reporter frightened and ran away from her in a blink of eyes. Seeing the flame around Li Sheng, Benjamin headed to her with beef in his hand. “XYZ don’t cease your fire! I want make barbeque, “ He said with excellent American accent.
“Don’t worry, I have to prolong it along the story, my XYZ would become the hottest XYZ!” She grinned happily to Benjamin but smirked as she peeked on Zhang Rui. “I miss my delicious pork because his belief!”
Back to Qingchuan
“Bullshit! This remake will be biggest trash, the white guy will ruin the nice story, and this is not historically accurate! I have to come to the shooting location and fix it, I won’t let Qiong Yao butchered her masterpiece, if Yu Zheng will, I don’t care, he still young and has many women, but Qiong Yao is just widower!"
After that she flopped down from the window and went heading to fake forbidden city to find the shooting crew.
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Zhang Xiao was humming happily, she got new lad and rich in law, she wandering around the gallery, her eyes widened when she saw an ink washed painting on the wall. Ma Er Tai Ruo Xi, the name is written under the woman painting, “Someone has painted me without my permit, so that would be ok, if I get my picture back to my home,” She wanted to grab the painting but it flew away outside the gallery. She ran after it, ran, ran, and ran like catching flying kite.
The gallery attendant didn’t recognize ZX as new QC, so she shouted when someone tried to grab the most precious painting in gallery, “Someone stole the painting!” She ran after to catch ZX hoping she would get prize for Mrs. Luo for catching a thief.
Another one parroted her, “Thief, thief!” Everyone attention changed to the voices, and flocking outside gallery to help the attendant catch thief.
The painting flew away to the forest, but Zhang Xiao was near-sighted so it so blur to watch the painting away. Instead went to the forest she headed to bustling street. She pondered while ran, where did the painting fly away? Then a painful spell stroke her, she flew away like the painting, before she hit the billboard, and electrocuted by wild wire. Her soul flew away left her body, it flew to very long tunnel, it’s the longest tunnel that she ever went through.
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“Xiao Yan Zi, the swallow who fly across lake Daming….!” He laughed happily, realizing this girl almost surely his long lost daughter. He didn’t know at that time XYZ didn’t only doze off to sleep, but also collapse to death. A few minute later he realized XYZ become paler and the warmth of her body has gone away, he panicked, “Taiyi, taiyi, come here, this is emergency!” He shouted frantically as he couldn’t find her breath.
“Good bye my beautiful body, I hope your fate and your trait would be better later,” the soul went up from XYZ body, she remembered the fate of the body once she occupied, a long her life, she had been poor and struggled for food and shelter, now the body had come to it’s heaven palace, and it would enjoy the most luxurious thing that she never ever got before she left it, now she flew to the true heaven.
Front of heaven gate
The 2 handsome fairies led her gently to the heaven, “Please come in Xiao Jie,” the fairy greeted her friendly, he cupped her hand.
Right before she strode to the heaven, she heard very noisy screams and shouts, they’re come from the hell, in the hell the Hades was whipping a girl with flare whip, she grimaced in pain, ”Ouch! Ouch! Let me go, off, off!” A girl screamed with stained blood in her forehead. “I don’t deserve this, you must be wrong, I spend my life time to serve my master, my devotion to her sooooo sincere, I don’t believe this would I get from my good deeds! It’s not fair, not fair at all!” She cried and sobbed, her tear not only make river on her eyes, it flowed in to the hell and cease half of it’s fire, so amazing! the hell wouldn’t be as hot as before!
XYZ recognized the voices was belong to Chin Suo, so she begged the fairy to let her help CS, of course the fairy let her. “Hades, she was my friend in earth and she’s very loyal to her master, even very protective, please spare her!” she kneeled before Hades begged him pitifully.
“Do you know why she come to hell?” asked Hades gently.
XYZ shook her head.
“That because she discourage her master to make her own way meet her father, thus she rely on you, and you took a brave action to help her, now please go back to heaven, I will release her after she pay her mistake,” He gave the code to handsome fairies to pick her, then he glared at CS, ”Now, pump the flame back! The hell must hot enough and full flame, after you done your job you may leave hell out!” Hades smirked CS. “Thank, thank, I will do it,” CS cried, her eyes were glittering with happiness. “Say thanks to your friend, I do it for her shake,” he looked at XYZ’s shadow, he awed her kindness and her beauty truthfully, “I never saw a spirit as beautiful as her before.”
Label:
Bu Bu Jing Xin,
comedy,
Fanfiction,
Gong,
huan zhu ge ge fanfic,
Jade Palace Lock Heart,
Parody,
Qing Chuan,
Ruo Xi,
time trafeling,
Xiao Yan Zi,
Zhang Xiao
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